Marriage is for Certain People?

            Marriage is a commitment between two people who agree to be in a relationship for the rest of their lives. This commitment can be between any person, no matter the race, sex, or appearances. Their commitment with each other is suppose to be forever lasting and unbreakable. Why would the Government take this away from two people just because they’re the same sex? What if you was trying to marry and all of a sudden BAM! ,you're denied because of something that isn't right? People of the same sex shouldn’t be mistreated just because they view marriage slightly different. The Declaration of Independence didn’t single out any American, race, sex, and religion we are all the same but just in different ways, we are all human beings, and we are all Americans. That’s what it was written for not for a certain group of people. I think same sex marriage should be legal and there are many reasons why.

            Two people of the same sex marring are not hurting anybody just by marring. It’s not illegal for homosexuals to be in a relationship so why is it legal for homosexuals to marry? A message from Martin Luther king’s letter from Birmingham jail was for people who was being treated wrong or was being prevented of their rights should step up and do something. People should step up and not be afraid to express themselves just because people are against it or don’t like it, and others should step up and help this become legal. From the Bible it says tattoos, gossiping, getting remarried are sins but people still do it. Why would we over look things like that which are sins but use the Bible as a source to stop gay marriages? If that’s the case then people are basically saying tattoos, sex before marriage, and remarrying should also be illegal then.

      Making same sex marriage illegal is a form of discrimination; it is basically saying that the government isn’t going to let someone marry just because they are homosexual. Does homosexuals’ marrying bother people that bad? Marriage is a personal choice and should be shared between any couple that desires to have it. Most people would stand up and say something if they were a part of a something that wasn’t being treated far. So we can’t just ignore somebody for wanting to be treated far, we have to look at it from their point of view before we can just deny someone just because we don’t like it. That’s why I think homosexuals should be allowed to marry, it’s just my opinion and I think its right.


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